

Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START odern fashion, go some country they like. Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE However,be an idol can have a lot of advantages an.


Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE However,if they want to be an idol they must be careful because to be an idol it has a lot of dark sides. many idols they get criticized they can think optimistic so some idols can kill themselves.īecome an idol can get a lot of benefits like they can achieve more other privileges, earn a lot of money or they can be everyone's attention. Moreover, sometimes idol can take a little fault but everyone think this is a big fault so they always criticized them. idols they want to take a rest but they can because their community require they perform day by day so they do not have free time to take a rest or do any active they like. In addition, idol they always perform so they always tired and can get stress. sometimes idol and take threaten of paparazzi and cray fans so they always scared. paparazzi and crazy fans they always anoy their idol everywhere. idol can feel annoyed about paparazzi and crazy fans. many idols they don't have their personal life, they always being someone else invaded the personal life. However, it is very dangerous if they want to become an idol. people always care them because they are very famous on around the world. Actually, in Korea many famous bands like Blackpink, Twice, Red Velvet, BTS. many idol they alway get attention about their fan. Thirdly, if they are normal people everyone don't pay attention them but if they become an idol they can be everyone's attention. Their idol always perform a lot of concert so they can earn lots of money from their community. like in Korea, in this country they have three big community entertainment( SM entertainment, YG entertainment and JYP entertainment) they often call these community entertainment is "3Big". Secondly, any idol like singer, model, dancer they always perform so they can earn a lot of money from their community. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and dangers of to be an idol.įirstly, to be an idol they can achieve more other privileges like modern fashion, go some country they like. However,be an idol can have a lot of advantages and disadvantages. Nowadays, many people the want to be an idol to take benefits for them.
